Automated responses need BETTER ENGLISH... please

[GreenGambler]

Hello,

I have been keeping tabs on the automated responses and think that some need to be revised so that they read more naturally.

I've noticed that there are some mod's I can download but I'd rather just see the script updated.

Here is what I've found:

Adding a new video to your favorites:
Currently: "The video successfully added to your favorite."
Change to: "You have successfully added this video to your favorites"
Or: "The video has been added to your favorites."

Adding a current video to your favorites:
Currently: "You already added this video to your favorite."
Change to:"You have already added this video to your favorites."
Or: "This video is already in your favorites list."

Joining a Group:
Currently: "You became the member of this group."
Change to:"You are now a member of this group."

Adding a Video to a Group:
Currently: "The video is added to the group."
Change to:"Your video has been added to the group."

Adding another video comment:
Currently: "Your already posted comments on this video."
Change to:"You have already commented on this video."

Adding a vido comment:
Currently: "Your comments has posted successfully."
Change to:"Your comment has been successfully posted."

Rating a video:
Currently: "You already vote this video."
Change to:"You have already rated this video."
Or: "You have already given this video a rating."

Sending a friend request:
Currently: "Your invite sent successfully."
Change to:"Your invite has successfully been sent."

Accepting a friend request:
Currently: "You have accepted the request of a friend."
Change to:"You have accepted the friend request."

On the group membership Status Page, if you are a member:
Currently: "You are the member of this group."
Change to:"You are a member of this group."

On the group membership Status Page, if you are not a member:
Currently: "You are not the member of this group."
Change to:"You are not a member of this group."





That is all I have on my list so-fat. If I come up with any more I will post them.

Also, if anyone else finds any "bad english" automated responses, please post them here:

Use this format to keep it uniform:

Bad English Location:
Currently: "Original Text."
Change to:"Revision."

:idea: :!:
Thanks for the great Vshare script Admin, I honestly feel this little script edit will give a nice boost in the total script quality:) :!: :idea:

[leki]

well i have already changed and corrected them all here http://forums.buyscripts.in/viewtopic.php?t=1018

errors/messages are stored in include\language\en directory

There are still a lot of poorly worded error messages hard coded into the script though that we cant access so admin would have to fix them or get them all out to the external files.

[GreenGambler]

I see that you have made a modification but what I would like is for the admin, when he/she has time, to update the Vshare script so that it contains the correct English in all future upgrades.

No hurry but as I said earlier, I do believe it will greatly increase the credibility of the script.